Three Word Wednesday
where each week you write something
using the three prompt words.
This week's words are . . .
break, negative, surface
T H E M
She was
luminous, lit up
she bent like a willow
so that she wouldn't break
touching the ground
with green fingers
she was reaching
down into the
earth
he
studied
the negative
stroking the surface
polishing the reflections
and making them
shine
Between them
the electrons flowed
completing a circuit
so much electricity
you could feel it
crackling
in the
air
.
where each week you write something
using the three prompt words.
This week's words are . . .
break, negative, surface
T H E M
She was
luminous, lit up
she bent like a willow
so that she wouldn't break
touching the ground
with green fingers
she was reaching
down into the
earth
he
studied
the negative
stroking the surface
polishing the reflections
and making them
shine
Between them
the electrons flowed
completing a circuit
so much electricity
you could feel it
crackling
in the
air
.
20 comments:
It's beautiful :)
Science and romance combined. Clever.
this poem is such a lovely mix, sensual, sterile, scientific, natural, erotic...lovely. This one will be with me for a while.
So beautiful... It's sparking but soft at the same time...
really well done.
Keep writing..
pitching forward
very different, and well said.. :)
My 3 Word Wednesday
Creative work, unique, well written!
I really like the flow of this piece.
"So much electricity you could feel it crackling in the air"
I just love how you ended this lovely poem...
Oooh, that is beautiful! Form and function, poetry and science.
this was not only a feast for the mind...it was a feast for the eyes! Very creative.
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Hello everyone, Thanks very much for dropping in, reading and leaving a comment, I really appreciate it!
Susannah :-)
Beautiful words and I liked the form too.
Pretty interesting take on the prompts..
its wow!! amazing! the way u wrote it and interpreted the design! :)
Well crafted, building a life between them suggested. We need not describe everything.
Another beautiful piece. I love how you conveyed his chemistry with her.
Thanks everyone, I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a comment. :-)
beautiful portrait... and the format gives the story more power... after rereading slowly the thought came across as if perhaps the greening of technology... the quiet still of yes and no
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