Sunday, 19 September 2010

Shadows - Sunday 160

My first time participating in Monkey Mans - Sunday 160 - where you must use only 160 characters (including spaces) and post on Sunday.

Lately, I have been unsettled by the shadows
those fleeting glimpses at the periphery of my vision
for there seem to be ghosts living in the corner of my eye...

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8 comments:

Deborah said...

This is wonderful, I love it, and I love the beautiful eye, it fits the words just perfectly!

gospelwriter said...

hehe - I know that feeling, hadn't thought of them as at the corner of my eye though - love your 160!

PattiKen said...

Very nice. I hope you come to 160 again.

Monkey Man said...

I have so had that experience. I dedicated a post to one of those experiences in November of last year with the same title you used - "Shadows". Gives you a creepy feeling, doesn't it? Thanks for being a part of my Sunday 160. Hope to see you again.

Brian Miller said...

oh chilling...the things that live just beyond what we see...nice 160

Susannah said...

Thanks for the welcome, it was fun and I will be there next week!

Monkey Man I went back and read your experience, strange isn't it? It had been happening to me all day yesterday so I wrote about it for your 160.

Good to meet you all.

Susannah :-)

gautami tripathy said...

I do relate to this kind of fear.



something fishy

And do get aboard the Poetry Train every Monday mornings and thereafter and post any of your works!!

Kerry O'Connor said...

An exceptional piece - I love the dark touch to the description.

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