Sunday, 19 September 2010

Microfiction Monday #49

This weeks picture prompt from Microfiction Monday at Stony River
The task: a tweetable 140 characters or fewer inspired by the picture below...


He was high
as he watched
the people go by
and the sky was blue
and the pink clouds
were swirling and
he wanted this
moment to last
F O R E V E R


24 comments:

SparkleFarkle said...

Oh, how this Love Bird sings!

Wonderful take!
SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

Susan at Stony River said...

Ah, love!
What a wonderful moment!

Greyscale Territory said...

Such a romantic moment and Mother Nature offers her blessing!

Peggy said...

Love is so grand. Really liked your presentation too.
Have a good week.

Diane said...

I would too!!! Love it :O)

gospelwriter said...

And small wonder... that is a classy lady he's got there. But it is a proper setup for romance, isn't it? I liked your story!

sylviamorice said...

I hope the moment lasted forever for him, too!
Have a great week. Cheers!

KB said...

So romantic. Lovely MM.

SouthLakesMom said...

Seems like SPRING and a young man's fancy turns to . . . oh yeah!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Two in Love, wonderful MfM

quilly said...

I know just how he feels. There is nothing better than being high on love.

Deborah said...

This is brilliant ... maybe I got it wrong but I didn't think he was high on love! ;o)

Ellie said...

That is so romantic and lyrical - I loved it!

Have a lovely week x

David said...

Only love will make you feel this way. I liked this writing, and how the colour of the words match her's.

Granny Sue said...

Sweet :) Why wasn't I more romantic in my story? Darn.

Susannah said...

I am enjoying the comments and your interpretations of my 140. I didn't actually mean this to be a tale of love and romance but if that is what is being seen, then that is good too. LOL

Susannah ;-)

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

this was so romantic.. loved it!

Pat said...

Ah, true love...makes the world a brighter, happier place no matter what! Great post!!

Prayer Girl said...

I loved the fact that you brought out the colors of this picture in your Micro-Fiction Monday. So vibrant.

PG

septembermom said...

Lovely image and feeling invoked. Great job!

EG Wow said...

I enjoyed the positive spin! I want it to last forever too.

Scott said...

and so it has... forever immortalized online among us all :-) how nice!

Jenny said...

You are really good at this micro-fiction stuff.

I saw a micro-fiction writing contest the other day but it had a 15 dollar entry fee.

Suz said...

oh dear....
deep inside
it was about romance
and it was a grand one Susannah

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