Sunday, 5 September 2010

Microfiction Monday #47

This weeks picture prompt from Microfiction Monday at Stony River
The task: a tweetable 140 characters or fewer inspired by the picture below...

She paid for the etching and took it home.
She had to buy it, nothing else had ever
come this close to summing up
the way she felt before.
.

26 comments:

anthonynorth said...

Cleverly done. Enjoyed it.

Pat said...

Great caption for the picture! Don't we all feel overwhelmed at times?!

Diane said...

Ahhhhh! Definitely brought up a response in my heart for her. :O)

quilly said...

Oh! Very good! I do know this feeling!

Peggy said...

Good take on this picture.
One I hadn't thought of!
Good job.

Sylvia K said...

Great one for the day! And I can so relate!!

Sylvia

sylviamorice said...

Ohh--I really like this one--hadn't thought to go that route at all, but you did a great job with it! Hope you have an awesome week. Cheers.

Dave said...

Nice.

Easily the driest I've read yet.

Dave
Dave Wrote This

Fay's Too said...

VERY good, my dear. Totally different perspective. like it.

Peggy said...

Wow, she must be in turmoil inside.
Good take on Susan's picture this week.
I think this is my first time visiting your blog. Like it , very much!

Prayer Girl said...

I can relate. There have been times in my life when this picture would have summed things up perfectly.

My first try at a Micro-Fiction Monday is up.

PG

Sophie said...

Amazing how such short sentences can conjure up such powerful feelings. Very very nicely done!

Deborah said...

Brilliant!!

Ellie said...

Beautiful microfiction, with a different take on the picture. Wonderful.

Have a great week x

EG Wow said...

AH! Deep thoughts! Nicely done!

jabblog said...

Excellent!

hope said...

Sort of seems like a poster for Mondays, doesn't it?

Suz said...

oh very good one Susannah! and I had that feeling about the one with the girl on the ship looking at mermaids..I wished I could have it....hmmm..we're art lovers I guess
so happy you in this game and challenge...
and I noted your comment on the top of your blog..writing when prompted too...funny and so true
get the rust moving

Jingle said...

witty words,
lovely done!

Susannah said...

Thanks everyone for your great comments, much appreciated. :-)

I love microfiction monday, it's such great fun!

Mama Zen said...

Nice take on the picture!

John's comments said...

nice when we find art that does that.Here's my 140. Sorry for the delay but dealing with drama of son having to dash across Italy to catch his flight. Hope your week goes better then his!

Susan at Stony River said...

That's thinking outside the usual - I love it! And now that you mention it, maybe I chose this photo simply because it looks like how I feel! LOL

SouthLakesMom said...

I love how your story is outside the picture. If I found that etching I might do the same...it is very provocative!

Very well done!

Michael G-G said...

A great take on this one! Enjoyed it.

Have a great week.

Jim said...

Well done. Come see my etchings!
It was for real. Good take, Susan.
Thank you for peeking in on mine.
..

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