to write a small vignette or poem using the photo below as your inspiration.
S U S P I C I O N
Those dark placesthe tightly shuttered screen
I know just where it is you've been
Those perfumed wrists
did you know that I can tell
the disguise you use to mask your smell
23 comments:
Wonderfully written, it's left me looking over my shoulder just reading it!
"the disguise you use to mask your smell" wonderful line :)
WOW... The last stanza. Seriously? Nice write. Love and Light, Sender
wow...nice Magpie!
Perfume ... the ability to hide what we need to hide? Nicely written.
Wow, there's a whole world there in so few words. Really skillfully done. And I love the sinister undertone!
Sometimes the disguise gives away the guilty secret. Beautifully succinct :-)
Sprung in a deligtrful few words! It used to be used to disguise lack of a bathroom! But, come to think of it, there were a few times...
What a mask perfume can be..just brilliant!!
Ah, mystery and intrigue! I like it!
Wow!
So do you let on
that you know?
Or do you sit back
and watch the show...
Rene
Oh caught I would say! Nice writing
Ah, there's a soupcon of truth in those words!! Nicely done...
Darkly delicious.
I want to read more like this from you!
baton of time
Ha, got him!
Presumably it is a him?
Susannah this is a powerful poem...beautifully written! :-)
Excellent, Susannah. This was a joy to read.
We know, and in knowing? Where do we go?
Loved your magpie
Thanks everyone for your comments, Much appreciated.
Susannah :-)
Nice! Love the last stanza, still an air of mystery...
Great magpie.
Excellent Maggie!
Fabulous... someone's has been naughty but not careful enough :).. Great mag
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