I have been dirtybut now I am clean
I have been invisible
but now I am seen
I have been confused
but now I am clear
I have been far away
but now I am near
I have been my ego
but now I'm my soul
I was broken in pieces
but now - I am whole
For more on the subject of clean - read my Magpie tale
- it seems to be a trending topic this week!
- it seems to be a trending topic this week!
Image - Susannah Bec
8 comments:
Simple but powerful. Like :-)
So much said in so little! I agree with Flying Monkey. This was very, VERY powerful. You have a way with words! :] I especially liked the repetition of the sentence structure. It helped form a rhythm.
Keep up the good work!
you have the power to be simple and yet explain everything perfectly
better clean than careful
I love this, the structure of the poem really adds to the power of the poem ... brilliant!
Full of meaning, and smooth, soothing cadence
what a perfectly crisp and clean poem..spot on! thanks for your vist..Jae
Deep!
my monkey reads you well
Susannah, I like this. It reminded me so much of "Amazing Grace". I think it could be set to music beautifully.
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