Week 21 of Saturday Centus
this weeks prompt is to use up to 100 words
(not including the prompt) using the line . . .
He never dreamed when he blew out the candles on his cake
this weeks prompt is to use up to 100 words
(not including the prompt) using the line . . .
He never dreamed when he blew out the candles on his cake
B I R T H D A Y
He never dreamed when he blew out the candles on his cake the fiasco that would ensue! If he hadn't been wearing the joke teeth and false beard combo, then it could all have been avoided, (it was easy to realise that in hindsight). He had taken a big breath and as he blew, the teeth shot out and landed slap bang in the middle of Marjorie's much slaved over sherry trifle. He then leaned in to retrieve them and the beard caught fire! Well you can imagine the scene... and Polly did the only thing she could and liberally doused him in lemonade as Marjorie valiantly tried to resurrect the trifle.(exactly 100 words) .
17 comments:
LOL ... brilliant, I absolutely loved this, a great SC! :o)
Oh my that would have been funny to see .
That was one heck of a birthday!
Really fun.
=)
That is so funny! You have a flair for comedy!
Good use of the prompt.
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC week 21
I love slapstick, and this just cracked me out. I'm going to have a vision of those teeth landing in the trifle stuck in my head for DAYS! Loved this, great use of the prompt. Kat
Next year, I bet he gets Polident as a gift to hold in any other teeth that may be flying out!
Very funny stuff!
Wahahahaha. The definition of backfire! Very good!~ Ames
Brilliant! And here I thought I was soooo clever.
Yours was wonderful. I really laughed over your take on this...when you read mine you'll see why!
You nailed this.
Very cool, girl.
This is hilarious. Thanks for the fun and laughter!
xoRobyn
The tears are still streaming! Well done - such great creatvie words to paint that wonderful picture! Well done!
Too funny. I bet that's one cake incident that will never be forgotten, ha, ha, ha.
LOL! That was hilarious! Such a unique and clever take on the prompt, Susannah! Very well done!
Hahaha! So very clever! I can see it all happening.
Thanks everyone! I really enjoyed your comments. This was a fun one to do! :-)
So fun ... a wonderful piece of slapstick. I could see it happening in my mind as I read.
Oh too cute! A fabulous funny scene for sure (from afar of course)
Wonderful! I immediately got an imagine of Peter Sellers as Inspector Clouseau.
Thanks for the laugh and for the good writing..........cj
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