Sunday, 12 September 2010

Microfiction Monday #48

This weeks picture prompt from Microfiction Monday at Stony River
The task: a tweetable 140 characters or fewer inspired by the picture below...


Eileen had the gun and Jenny the plane tickets.
After the bank job they took the three million pounds
and headed straight for the bahamas.,

25 comments:

Pat said...

No one would ever suspect these elegant ladies of being bank robbers---perfect disguises.

Suz said...

Ha! oh yes they did
with smiles on their faces!

Jim said...

Eileen and Jenny, Bonnie and Clyde of the new ages. I'm glad their headed away from here!
Very nice, terribly funny! :)
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Ms.Daisy said...

This is great - I can picture it clearly. . .LOL!



~Jean

Diane said...

Wouldn't want to mess with them! :O)

EG Wow said...

Hmmm. I bet these two could easily pull that off!

Dave said...

Stopping only to pose for the photo that would ultimately lead to their downfall.

Nice take on it.

Dave
Dave Wrote This

Peggy said...

OMG, this is so funny. Perfect fit for the picture. Have a good great week.

steveroni said...

WHAT? No "follow-up"??? Great job, Susannah!

Here, I've got one (140 words!):

Jenny deplaned, tripped, broke her ankle, clutching the money bag.

Through tears, she saw Eileen raise the pistol to her head and squeez

That's IT!
PEACE!
Steve E

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Let me guess, Thelma and Louise's Mothers. Nicely done

KB said...

That explains the big coats.

Have a great week.

Ellie said...

LOL. Brilliant. I went for a similar angle with my story - they just looked too sweet to be good! Loved your microfiction.

p.s. I’m running a competition this week and holding a blogfest in November. If you get time, pop along and have a look.

Madeleine said...

Very amusing. Brilliant! Glad you enjoyed mine too and the Haiku.:O)

Deborah said...

That just fits pefectly with the photo, made me LOL... brilliant!!

Patrick D. said...

Criminals seem to be a recurring theme for this pic. Good work. Thanks for visiting mine.

SouthLakesMom said...

Perfect! But the Bahamas aren't far enough! They need to go somewhere further from the Crown's authority! Run, girls, RUNNNNNN!

sylviamorice said...

I love this one! Very funny take on the picture--I can actually imagine these two gals pulling off a heist like that...hope they get away with it.
Cheers!

Mama Badger said...

The real question is who's taking the picture and will he squeal?

Mama Zen said...

Go, girls, go!

gospelwriter said...

I would've too! You got a lot of livin' into 140, well done ;)

John's comments said...

Beats housework...Thanks for dropping by to read my 140 Hope your week goes well

hope said...

And no one would've looked at them twice...nice!

Susan at Stony River said...

Wonderful! I like these two even better after this story! (and oh I wish I had the guts to get myself to the Bahamas in some dramatic fashion -- LOL)

LV said...

What a fun blog this is. You had a great caption for yours today. I will have to check this out more often.

Susannah said...

Thanks everyone for dropping in and reading! I love your comments. :-)

Susannah. x

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