This weeks prompt for Carry On Tuesday is ...
'It started out as a feeling which then grew into a hope'
'It started out as a feeling which then grew into a hope'
B A C K B O N E
She
felt
it
start
inside
her
.
and
crawl
naked
up
her
spine
.
clinging
to
her
on
the
inside
.
It
started
out
as
a
feeling
.
which
then
grew
into
a
hope
.
up
through
the
dark
inner
spaces
.
a
tiny
seed
seeking
the
light
.
14 comments:
Oh this is wonderful and such a clever way to write it ... just brilliant!
This is excellent!
Oh, lovely! And very similar in imagery to what I ended up with, too. I love seeing where the prompt takes everyone. :)
I like this a lot.
super lovely.
I love the way the monostich is also a calligram. Clever.
I like this, but then I would. We are on a similar wavelength. I also like your presentation of the piece. It works really well.
Elizabeth
"a tiny seed seeking the light" - I like your poem a lot, especially considering the title you gave it
I recently wrote a poem in this single-word-line format, but didn't quite have the nerve to publish it... it is perfect for your poem, perfect
Clever presentation for your thoughtful poem.
Clever, love the way the poem is presented. i love even more the sense of hope you sparked in me. :)
Thanks everyone for the comments, much appreciated. :-)
You have definitely characterized 'hope' here. Nice.
I love your backbone poem and the clever way you placed it on the page........and I am a big fan of hope, so this one was a winner!
I love your thoughts expressed so well here, and such an interesting form!
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