Sunday, 10 October 2010

Under Our Feet - Sunday 160

It is easy to forget that under our feet
and under the floors
and tarmac
and pavements

under the grass of the fields
and flowers

under everything...
lies earth


Written for -
Monkey Mans - Sunday 160
where you must use only 160 characters
(including spaces) and post on Sunday.


(exactly 160 characters)

9 comments:

Deborah said...

So very true, I loved this :o)

Monkey Man said...

So True. Yet we still seem to want to cover her up with our black tar and concrete. Great 160. Thanks for playing.

Brian Miller said...

ha. i like this. i am particularly fond of it...feels good on my bare feet. better than asphalt...smiles. nice 160, mine is up!

Mama Zen said...

This is beautiful!

gospelwriter said...

Lovely, poetic, and true. In the country growing up, it was less easy to forget...

PattiKen said...

I love this. There is nothing more basic.

Alice Audrey said...

That's getting down the the bedrock of the issue. :)

My 160 is here.

liv2write2day said...

You nailed it, Susannah. Well done.

She said...

I love the earth - especially digging in the soil with my bare hands when gardening. Great 160!

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