Thursday, 14 October 2010

Lightcatcher - Magpie Tale 36

Magpie Tales hosts a weekly writing prompt, the challenge is to write a small vignette or poem using the photo below as your inspiration.

L I G H T C A T C H E R

Impetuous now
trying to catch the light
audacious arms
outstretched
like
barren branches
coveting
those yellow strands
aching to feel
those
soft ribbons
of warmth
draping
like
Summer

18 comments:

Paul Andrew Russell said...

Lovely, Susannah. Oh I wish it was summer.

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

this was luscious...and I love that golden band woven throughout the text.

beautiful

Arian said...

i love the illusion the colored lines create :)

Deborah said...

Deliciously written

soft ribbons
of warmth
draping
like
Summer

... wonderful :o)

Berowne said...

Beautifully expressed.

Jinksy said...

How cleverly you added your own sunbeam! :)

willow said...

Lovely, and the ribbons of gold passing through your text are such a nice touch!

Martin H. said...

"..soft ribbons
of warmth
draping
like
Summer.." Oh, yes!

Kay L. Davies said...

Beautiful little poem. And I love the gold color going through it.

Kay, Alberta, Canada

Jingle said...

love this.

Kristen Haskell said...

And boy do I ache for summer in more ways than one. Beautiful!

gautami tripathy said...

I am not a summer person yet I liked what you wrote here!

fortune tellers

kathi harris said...

Luv the gold thruout... the light catcher.

Brian Miller said...

this was beautiful and love what you did witht he colors of the letters...arms outstretched...nice magpie!

Erratic Thoughts said...

Warm and sweet...
Almost dreamy...:)
I so liked the overall structure of the piece...:)

nimaruichi said...

'Aching to feel' ah!

Tumblewords: said...

Beautiful - it feels like a mantra!

C.M. Jackson said...

colors of autumn-words of life-great magpie!

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