Inspired by Three Word Wednesday this week's prompt words are fragile, rampant, tremor.
P
E
A
C
E
peace
so fragile
has escaped me
it spills through my fingers
rampant, no longer contained
it is free running
and it pours
.
.
.
P
E
A
C
E
peace
so fragile
has escaped me
it spills through my fingers
rampant, no longer contained
it is free running
and it pours
.
.
.
tiny
pyramids
mounding like
molehills at my feet
pyramids
mounding like
molehills at my feet
I tremor at the thought
of the mountains they will bring
then I put a halt to the rushing tide
I create barriers with my breath
and with the soft brush
of my attention
I sweep and
I gather
until
all the
peace is
once again
contained inside.
of the mountains they will bring
then I put a halt to the rushing tide
I create barriers with my breath
and with the soft brush
of my attention
I sweep and
I gather
until
all the
peace is
once again
contained inside.
14 comments:
Glad it is contained in you again...
corners
So beautifully written, again your words are like music!
I love the shape of this poem, and the way the words fall into the shape so seamlessly. Wonderful use of the prompt!
Awesome! Amazing image you have created. I'm in awe of your talent.
Peace...this is awesome...I love it... :)
Nice..amazed at your creativity!
How lovely to gather peace..I can imagine it being swept into your hands..very captiviating..thanks as ever for your visit..Jae
I was so into the design I had to read it a few times. Both are beautiful
And thanks for visiting my blog :)
Great form--content and shape! It's beautiful imagery for losing and gather peace into yourself. Very nice!
Perfect vision of peace :)
I like it.
Thanks for stopping by my blog btw <3
Beautifully constructed.. loved the visual as well as the thought!
Like Pia, the design was the first impact, but the poem rewarded re-reading and re-reading.
Very Beautiful Susannah..!!
Thanks for sharing this.. xox
prayers, love this.
masterful job.
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