This is week 16 of Saturday Centus themed writing meme.
This week the prompt and the title of the story is . . .
What I did over my Summer Vacation.
The Rules are: Your story must be written in first person AND must be exactly 100 words long. It can be fact or fiction.
The Rules are: Your story must be written in first person AND must be exactly 100 words long. It can be fact or fiction.
What I did over my Summer Vacation.
I walked along the waters edge, crashing waves and soft sand a balm for a city girl like me. I made my way up the steep track and along towering cliffs up toward the lighthouse, sunbaked under the cobalt blue sky. I sat on the soft green grass and listened to the gulls as they wheeled overhead playing in the thermals. I gazed out to the horizon as the fiery sun slipped lazily down to the ocean, then watched as purple gave way to the black star studded night . . .I sat at home, eyes closed, dreaming. . . and I was there.
16 comments:
Oh yeah! Loved this! I, too, only dreamed about a vacation this year! Your description was beautiful. I was right there with you!
Nice trip! I have traveled that way too! Enjoyed it....
Absolutely riveting. Beautiful.
You painted such a vivid picture, I felt like I was there too lol. Great job.
I can almost feel the sea breeze!
Really nice.
=)
Wonderful and so beautifully written.
Nicely done. Summer is definitely a great time for daydreams!
Oh, yeah! Been there...done that. In fact, I did that this year and the year before and the year before...
I think you get the idea! But we do have nice day dreams, don't we? You described your "travels" so well!
I just posted my contribution. Please stop by!
Malisa
oh another daydreamer...I love it!
Beautiful discription. I'm there with you, even if it's a dream!
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's Saturday Centus Week-16
beautiful! i felt like i was there even if only in a dream along with you
Hi everyone
Thanks so much for all the lovely comments. Glad to have you along on my Summer Vacation! ;-)
Good to meet you all.
Pan x
This was beautiful! I could taste the salt and feel that wonderful breeze. Wonderfully descriptive.
Hi Kat, thank you for joining me on my vacation. ;-)
Good to meet you.
Oh, this was beautiful.
This is as close as I got to a vacation this year as well.
Yours was a whole bunch better than the one I imagined for myself.
So I'm going to just visualize myself in your story, too.
I'll bring the cupcakes!
Thanks for linking.
Hi Jenny and I would love to have you on my vacation, especially as you are bringing cupcakes! :-)
Thanks very much for your comment, it is appreciated. :-)
Post a Comment