Tuesday, 17 August 2010

Stony River - Microfiction Monday #44

This is my first try at . . .

Microfiction Monday
at Stony River
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.

Here's this week's picture. . .


Black knight you haunted my dreams

until I found the courage

to lift up your visor

and found

only light

11 comments:

Jim said...

Wonderful, Pan! Just to lift the visor and discover what had been hidden for who knows how long!

Welcome to Microfiction Monday. I hope you liked this writing. It easy to get hooked.
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septembermom said...

Finding that light of potential life or love...wonderfully said here. I'm happy to have found your blog. I look forward to following you :)

sylviamorice said...

Hauntingly beautiful. Great first post for Microfiction Monday. Hope to read more of your work.

jinksy said...

Let there be light...
the best way to deal with scary dark!

Deborah said...

Beautifully written!! :o)

pan said...

Jim, thanks so much for the warm welcome, I can see how easy it is too get hooked! I am already looking forward to next week. :-)
Nice to meet you.


septembermom, thanks very much for your lovely comment. It is great to meet you. :-)


sylviamorice, I really enjoyed the challenge of writing so little! Thanks very much for your comment, it is much appreciated. :-)


jinksy - you are so right! Thanks very much for visiting. :-)


Deborah, thanks very much. :-)


I can see this becoming a new addiction! Great fun and it's really nice to meet so many great people.

pan. x

Diane said...

Great rhythm! Have a great weekend :O)

Jennifer said...

Gorgeous!

Lovely layout and rhythm and a concise but complete story. I love it.

Pan said...

Diane, thanks very much. :-)

Pan said...

Jennifer, thank you very much for your comment, much appreciated. :-)

Pan said...

PS. Jennifer, we are already pals when I am not using my new pen (or should I say Pan) name. ;-)

Good to see you!

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