This is my first try at . . .
Microfiction Monday
at Stony River
Black knight you haunted my dreams
until I found the courage
to lift up your visor
and found
only light
Microfiction Monday
at Stony River
where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer.
Here's this week's picture. . .
Black knight you haunted my dreams
until I found the courage
to lift up your visor
and found
only light
11 comments:
Wonderful, Pan! Just to lift the visor and discover what had been hidden for who knows how long!
Welcome to Microfiction Monday. I hope you liked this writing. It easy to get hooked.
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Finding that light of potential life or love...wonderfully said here. I'm happy to have found your blog. I look forward to following you :)
Hauntingly beautiful. Great first post for Microfiction Monday. Hope to read more of your work.
Let there be light...
the best way to deal with scary dark!
Beautifully written!! :o)
Jim, thanks so much for the warm welcome, I can see how easy it is too get hooked! I am already looking forward to next week. :-)
Nice to meet you.
septembermom, thanks very much for your lovely comment. It is great to meet you. :-)
sylviamorice, I really enjoyed the challenge of writing so little! Thanks very much for your comment, it is much appreciated. :-)
jinksy - you are so right! Thanks very much for visiting. :-)
Deborah, thanks very much. :-)
I can see this becoming a new addiction! Great fun and it's really nice to meet so many great people.
pan. x
Great rhythm! Have a great weekend :O)
Gorgeous!
Lovely layout and rhythm and a concise but complete story. I love it.
Diane, thanks very much. :-)
Jennifer, thank you very much for your comment, much appreciated. :-)
PS. Jennifer, we are already pals when I am not using my new pen (or should I say Pan) name. ;-)
Good to see you!
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