Drench me with your summer love,
for I am not immune to darkness.
Smother me, until I radiate light
and pulse with all I have
left unspoken. . .
for I have been alone here,
and you are sunlight
knocking
at my
door.
*
For three word wednesday - this weeks prompt words were - drench, immune, radiate.
for I am not immune to darkness.
Smother me, until I radiate light
and pulse with all I have
left unspoken. . .
for I have been alone here,
and you are sunlight
knocking
at my
door.
*
For three word wednesday - this weeks prompt words were - drench, immune, radiate.
16 comments:
The distress of the subject is well-expressed in this piece. It is both dramatic and magical. Good job on this one! :-)
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Delightful read.. excellent.. each word spoke...
Good to have you back knocking at the TWW door..this is a wonderful ray of sunshine..Jae
oh! one of the most gorgeous love
poems I have read in a long time.
Thank you.
Lovely!
Blessings
truly heartwarming and filled with illuminating love.
It is flawlessly written and really captures the essence of both the prompt words as well as the spirit of the subject. Simply stunning! :)
You are sunlight... what a gorgeous image! This speaks of love as well as an emergence from solitude. Nicely done.
Really lovely piece Susannah. Good to have you back on TWW.
You brought the light. This poem illuminates our need for love. Beautifully done.
This is a lovely use of the prompt words.
Beautiful, in fact.
What a warming line to have sunlight knocking at my door. So well done.
This is beautiful! :)
Beautiful love poem to all that is living and light,
Elizabeth
Thanks very much everyone, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Good to see you all. x
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