Thursday, 18 August 2011

Fifty One S's






Sensitive surfaces,
Such slippery slopes.
Sounding spent shackles,
Singing sweet sweet songs,
Serenades to shaken sanity.
Stains on a savage salvation.
Soothing scarred serenity,
Subtle senses sparkling.
Scenarios shimmering,
Scintillating symmetry.
Seriously symbiotic.
Strings of sunlight,
Sky saturating.
Serendipity,
Streaming.
Shining,
Souls,
Sacred.


For the Thursday Think Tank prompt #62 - The 3rd letter of your first name.

22 comments:

Deborah said...

Super! Simply smashing :o)

Laurie Kolp said...

A smorgasbord sensation.

Mary said...

I LOVE your words and the shape of your poem! Sublime!

Kim Nelson said...

Wow, Susannah! I'd have expected a piece within which every word starts with the same letter to be contrived and boring. you proved me wrong. Very well wrought.

WyomingDiva said...

Clever!

Heaven said...

Stumped for words.. :-)

Nice word play...

Happy Friday ~

Mama Zen said...

Splendid!

sharplittlepencil said...

Smart, savvy, simply sensational! I cannot believe you found all those words in your cranium. I did one with all "f"s once; however, I did not stoop to the "F-bomb," and what a proud moments! Mine was "Y," and it's within the three posted:
http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/08/19/three-prompts-three-poems/
Peace, or should I say, Serenity! Amy

Old Ollie said...

51 - unreal!

Marian said...

spectacular!

Jinksy said...

Serenades to shaken sanity.

You can sing me one of those anytime! ♥

Paul Andrew Russell said...

That's a lot of S's! I like the shape of this.

Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Very smart, and surely successful! I'm an S too, but I never thought of a shape poem. :)

Daydreamertoo said...

Simply superb. Seriously!

Philip Thrift said...

Simply smashing set of sentences!

Susannah said...

Such a simply splendid set of super comments! Thanks all! :-)

Sheila Moore said...

Impressive alliteration!

Ella said...

Stunning and smart ;D

Susannah said...

Thanks very much Shelia and Ella. :-)

Doctor FTSE said...

Splendid words set in a superb shape.

The Gooseberry Garden said...

special and sweet,
superb sentiments shared.
smiles...sssssssss ;)

Susannah said...

Doctor and Gooseberry, thank you. :-)

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