Saturday, 15 January 2011

She Won! - Inspired by Saturday Centus

What a tricky one this week! for week 37 of Saturday Centus the prompt is to use up to 25 words! (not including the prompt) using the line "The Lottery Ticket..."

She Won!
The lottery ticket
was the winning one
she could hardly
contain her glee!

but she'd had to miss
all the celebrations
because the excitement
just made her pee!

29 comments:

Deborah said...

Oh this is so cute and funny, I LOVE it!

Kat said...

This was really funny, and very creative. Really nicely done. I had a horrid time cutting mine to 25 words! Kat

hip-chick said...

cute!

Terra said...

Laughed out loud, totally cute. Would have been me!

Koby said...

HILARIOUS...and I can sooo relate!

nimaruichi said...

Oh, no!
Fantastic.

gautami tripathy said...

LOL!

thigh Story

Bookie said...

What a hoot!

Strummed Words said...

A cute one!
My Lottery Ticket.

Sue said...

heehee

Winning is all about bladder control...

;)

Viki said...

LOL, too funny. Good job.

Tina said...

LOL. That would be me, too. Really great job here.

Happier Than a Pig in Mud said...

Yep, that would probably be me too-cute:@)

Anna said...

Very cute and funny and actually well-written. Great verse!
Best wishes,
Anna
Anna's SC#37-The lottery ticket

Judie said...

RLOL! You have no idea how much I appreciate that!!!

Tgoette said...

Great job! A very amusing and sweet take on the prompt. Well done!

cj Schlottman said...

This is precious! I didn't wet my drawers, but I did laugh a lot.

Great take..........cj

Malisa said...

Ha ha ha ha! Too funny!

Dazee Dreamer said...

hahaha. loved it. I would do that myself.

Jo said...

too cute ... i would be doing the same thing if i won!

Rawknrobyn.blogspot.com said...

What a fun, silly poem. Thanks for the laughs.
xoRobyn

Nancy Jane said...

A good twist and a good laugh!

faith said...

FUNNY! Didn't expect that. :)

Rek said...

Really loved this one.

linda said...

Hahahaha! i love this and TOTALLY understand the feeling.
giggle.

jeff campbell said...

Very nice...funny...such a great take on the prompt...Peace and blessings

Susannah said...

Thanks everyone for reading, I loved your comments! :-)

Jenny said...

Susannah! I love this! 25 words sure isn't much to go with! You did awesome!

Susannah said...

Thanks Jenny, you sure did make this a difficult one! :-)

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