Thursday, 12 January 2012


Your trust in me
was brutal

and I
with sullen pout
and that fire
within me

never let on
just how much
it meant

(for my father)

Written for Three Word Wednesday
using the prompt words - trust, brutal and sullen

Painting by Susannah Bec


Deborah said...

This made me cry Sue xxx

Susannah said...

Thanks Deb. x

Thom Gabrukiewicz said...

Sue, just a lovely piece. Wow.

Sheilagh Lee said...

it's a lovely tribute to your father.I'm sure he knows how much you love him.

The Unknowngnome said...

Very nice.

Wayne Pitchko said...

as a father and grandfather..i can appreciate...well written and thanks for sharing.....keep up the writing and painting

Jae Rose said...

Brutally wonderful..the picture so well placed amidst these brilliant words..Jae

Susannah said...

Thanks everyone. :-)

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