Wednesday, 1 December 2010

Jump - inspired by Three Word Wednesday

Inspired by Three Word Wednesday this week's prompt words are demise, effort, revival

J U M P

Was it such an effort
such a monumental leap
to jump from the mountain of you
to those low flat plains of me
did you fear your demise
or was the instant revival
of your once flagging spirits
all the reward you needed

11 comments:

Paul Andrew Russell said...

Nice use of the prompts, Susannah.

I've never tried the Three Word Wednesday prompts.

lalita choudhary said...

Sweet and lovely!! :)

jaerose said...

I hope it was enough to revive the jumping one! I love the idea of falling from a mountain to a plain..although maybe the plain offers a more solid and nourishing base than the mountain top..hmm..Jae

Ramesh Sood said...

Beautiful...

such a monumental leap
to jump from the mountain of you
to those low flat plains of me

Very creative!!!!!

Nanka said...

Is it like one small step forward leading to a giant leap and working wonders to a sagging confidence??

ThomG said...

love the beauty that you've created with this.

Angel said...

Very good. Loved the sentiment.

naramalone.com said...

A beautiful image of the imbalances in relationships

gautami tripathy said...

I like your writing!

snowed out

Jenny said...

Really excellent Susannah!

Sumit Sarkar said...

Beautiful...
The prompts are put to a very good use:)

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