Inspired by Three Word Wednesday this week's prompt words are demise, effort, revival
J U M P
Was it such an effort
such a monumental leap
to jump from the mountain of you
to those low flat plains of me
did you fear your demise
or was the instant revival
of your once flagging spirits
all the reward you needed
11 comments:
Nice use of the prompts, Susannah.
I've never tried the Three Word Wednesday prompts.
Sweet and lovely!! :)
I hope it was enough to revive the jumping one! I love the idea of falling from a mountain to a plain..although maybe the plain offers a more solid and nourishing base than the mountain top..hmm..Jae
Beautiful...
such a monumental leap
to jump from the mountain of you
to those low flat plains of me
Very creative!!!!!
Is it like one small step forward leading to a giant leap and working wonders to a sagging confidence??
love the beauty that you've created with this.
Very good. Loved the sentiment.
A beautiful image of the imbalances in relationships
I like your writing!
snowed out
Really excellent Susannah!
Beautiful...
The prompts are put to a very good use:)
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