Thursday, 12 January 2012

Undeserved

Your trust in me
was brutal
unflinching
undeserved

and I
with sullen pout
and that fire
within me

never let on
just how much
it meant


(for my father)

Written for Three Word Wednesday
using the prompt words - trust, brutal and sullen


Painting by Susannah Bec

8 comments:

Deborah said...

This made me cry Sue xxx

Susannah said...

Thanks Deb. x

ThomG said...

Sue, just a lovely piece. Wow.

Sheilagh Lee said...

it's a lovely tribute to your father.I'm sure he knows how much you love him.

The Unknowngnome said...

Very nice.

Wayne Pitchko said...

as a father and grandfather..i can appreciate...well written and thanks for sharing.....keep up the writing and painting

jaerose said...

Brutally wonderful..the picture so well placed amidst these brilliant words..Jae

Susannah said...

Thanks everyone. :-)

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