Your trust in mewas brutal
unflinching
undeserved
and I
with sullen pout
and that fire
within me
never let on
just how much
it meant
(for my father)
Written for Three Word Wednesday
using the prompt words - trust, brutal and sullen
Painting by Susannah Bec
8 comments:
This made me cry Sue xxx
Thanks Deb. x
Sue, just a lovely piece. Wow.
it's a lovely tribute to your father.I'm sure he knows how much you love him.
Very nice.
as a father and grandfather..i can appreciate...well written and thanks for sharing.....keep up the writing and painting
Brutally wonderful..the picture so well placed amidst these brilliant words..Jae
Thanks everyone. :-)
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