Nearly.
Such a potent word.
Full of what might have been.
Almost, but not quite.
Just a little more
One more push.
So close.
Nearly.
Such a potent word.
Full of what might have been.
Almost, but not quite.
Just a little more
One more push.
So close.
Nearly.
8 comments:
Nothing nearly about the perfect little verse!
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That's the same take I had on the prompt. Is nearly enough?
This little poem reminded me so much of urging my children on to achieve just little tasks and the joy on their faces as they did so.
"Full of what might have been" - your short poem spilled meaning.
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So simple yet speaking volumes...well written :)
The shape of your poem is like a bulb emerging from the soil..pushing it's way up and up..lovely post..always pays to keep trying..Jae :)
Nearly, the teasing of almost! Your post makes me think in lyrics now. Thank you.
Great post.
Fabulous. Love the shape.
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