tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post2726810974262577878..comments2023-09-04T09:31:46.467+01:00Comments on Panopticulated - writing when prompted to do so.: Love or Something Like it . . .Susannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-83853001676988403502011-08-27T08:32:55.313+01:002011-08-27T08:32:55.313+01:00Thanks very much Richard.Thanks very much Richard.Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-52016477607441333882011-08-27T07:26:24.945+01:002011-08-27T07:26:24.945+01:00Susannah, an amazing portrait. I sense charisma th...Susannah, an amazing portrait. I sense charisma that draws her in, even though his words are "all fizz and wasted glass". Love that image!<br /><br />RichardMr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-5708533434505848382011-08-25T22:01:05.885+01:002011-08-25T22:01:05.885+01:00Thanks very much MJ. :-)Thanks very much MJ. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-34846356637017374762011-08-25T17:22:07.619+01:002011-08-25T17:22:07.619+01:00A tremendous poem, full of some wonderful imagery....A tremendous poem, full of some wonderful imagery. Great use of the wordle words.<br />My favourite bit has to be, "She sweeps up the cold ash as it falls from his burnt out life." Love indeed.<br />Thanks for a great read.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-30114081966665111682011-08-24T18:13:06.305+01:002011-08-24T18:13:06.305+01:00Traci, thanks very much for your great comment. Y...Traci, thanks very much for your great comment. You summed it up beautifully! xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-26618232030437029532011-08-24T15:25:25.955+01:002011-08-24T15:25:25.955+01:00Terrific contrast in POVs, Susannah, first showing...Terrific contrast in POVs, Susannah, first showing us what the skeptic/cynic sees in the man, and then what the woman who loves him sees. Beautifully wordled.Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-81667215516055177142011-08-24T10:00:11.638+01:002011-08-24T10:00:11.638+01:00Thanks very much Willow. :-)Thanks very much Willow. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-67748358229774306632011-08-24T02:46:19.983+01:002011-08-24T02:46:19.983+01:00I love how this builds in excitement and descends ...I love how this builds in excitement and descends in the the gentle fall of light like a cloak…wonderful.Willowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12144768922185244207noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-10325306413673125192011-08-23T12:07:22.644+01:002011-08-23T12:07:22.644+01:00Thanks everyone for your kind words. Isn't it...Thanks everyone for your kind words. Isn't it wonderful when the wordle words lead to a story and just fall into place? <br /><br />I still find the wordles so exciting for that very reason, they take you out of your normal groove and pull other things out of the hat! :-)<br /><br />Good to see you all and thanks again. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-66622682826468355582011-08-23T10:38:15.178+01:002011-08-23T10:38:15.178+01:00This is such a WOW poem! I was swept along in the...This is such a WOW poem! I was swept along in the emotion of it.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-49419280062941205262011-08-23T00:29:33.578+01:002011-08-23T00:29:33.578+01:00I love the images you create in this poem: words t...I love the images you create in this poem: words that spin like plates, all fizz and wasted glass, afternoon light that falls gently around his shoulders like a cloak. So descriptive. Wonderful.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-57765428033840017682011-08-23T00:29:07.431+01:002011-08-23T00:29:07.431+01:00Love the title and the way you ended it was beauti...Love the title and the way you ended it was beautiful.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-57008239015763518112011-08-22T23:48:32.471+01:002011-08-22T23:48:32.471+01:00Brilliant writing, Susannah! I loved "words t...Brilliant writing, Susannah! I loved "words that spin like plates, and sparkle like screw top bottles, all fizz and wasted glass."Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-18258712103241760202011-08-22T20:57:34.577+01:002011-08-22T20:57:34.577+01:00No nonsense about these images! I saw and felt th...No nonsense about these images! I saw and felt them with such clarity ... I loved it!Liz Rice-Sosnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14705708193546909432noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-76553093748465837212011-08-22T20:18:01.419+01:002011-08-22T20:18:01.419+01:00I liked the way you spun out the story, and the ov...I liked the way you spun out the story, and the overall shape of the poem is very interesting. As others have noted, your imagery is superb.<br /><br />Thank you for sharing your work at Real Toads.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-59280619309864617922011-08-22T17:24:29.078+01:002011-08-22T17:24:29.078+01:00wow. your poem reminds me of the
movie - The Rainm...wow. your poem reminds me of the<br />movie - The Rainmaker with Burt<br />Lancaster and Katherine Hepburn.<br /><br />You have the quality of the shaman<br />and his zeal, its power down pat.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-29846619149961161892011-08-22T17:12:32.997+01:002011-08-22T17:12:32.997+01:00Vivid and wonderfully creative. A roller coaster r...Vivid and wonderfully creative. A roller coaster ride from sharply defined edges to that soft light of a cloak. A love poem of acceptance. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-29425357905995620392011-08-22T14:38:54.184+01:002011-08-22T14:38:54.184+01:00Great imagery Susannah!! The second half is typica...Great imagery Susannah!! The second half is typically the romantic you, in contrast to the first half which is powerful, and loved it immensely!! It is so soft gentle and could have lasted forever but suddenly ends like does a dream.<br />Strangely I pictured this in a desert land. :)Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-64289195580920698852011-08-22T10:10:43.044+01:002011-08-22T10:10:43.044+01:00I loved this, and 'words that spin like plates...I loved this, and 'words that spin like plates' and 'spills from the cracked cheap vessel of him' are just brilliant!!Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-25623935351146636742011-08-22T05:54:29.707+01:002011-08-22T05:54:29.707+01:00Well concealed wordle words, Susannah.
PamelaWell concealed wordle words, Susannah.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-33915738938009819012011-08-22T01:16:14.697+01:002011-08-22T01:16:14.697+01:00You definitely made the most of the wordle words! ...You definitely made the most of the wordle words! Wonderful images: "The too handsome stranger has words that spin like plates..." is perfection.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-73787717731522615232011-08-22T00:47:10.198+01:002011-08-22T00:47:10.198+01:00Susannah, a solid write. Your metaphors glow, and...Susannah, a solid write. Your metaphors glow, and the woman's preoccupation with sweeping up the granite crumbs sounds like Nancy Reagan to me! Amazing take on the Wordle. Amy<br /><br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/08/21/escape-can-be-forever-amy-winehouse/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-62718748041016565782011-08-22T00:30:32.732+01:002011-08-22T00:30:32.732+01:00It starts off so strong hitting and then ends so g...It starts off so strong hitting and then ends so gently with the comfort of his cloak upon the shoulders.<br />Lovely use of the wordle words.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-68701405657926132402011-08-21T23:15:56.792+01:002011-08-21T23:15:56.792+01:00Strong images carry the reader through this poem. ...Strong images carry the reader through this poem. I love the closing image most of all. It is beautiful.brenda whttp://undercaws.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-83087157767478270732011-08-21T22:56:29.261+01:002011-08-21T22:56:29.261+01:00Painted a picture as clearly as if I'd been st...Painted a picture as clearly as if I'd been standing right there in the scene. It was beautiful and deeply poetic, very thought-provoking and an absolutely joy to tuck away in my mind :)Scribblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09693402306029886703noreply@blogger.com