Wednesday, 8 September 2010

Wait - Sunday Scribblings Prompt 231

Written for Sunday Scribblings prompt 231 - Wait
This is a follow on from last weeks prompt
You can read last weeks here

He heard the horns and saw her running.

He yelled her name but she had already gone, zig zagging her way through the cars along the busy road leaving chaos in her wake.

Dashing off down the dimly lit side street with her big leaping strides and hair flowing behind her she was a mythical creature and he was in awe.

He wanted to run after her, chase her down and grab her slender limbs, turning her to face him so he could see his reflection dancing in her wild animal eyes.

He wanted to ask her one more time to wait, but he knew it would be pointless.

She never waited for anyone...


Deborah said...

Ooooh ...what happens next, stop writing gripping passages!!!
Brilliant :o)

Jae Rose said...

Punchy-ily done! I love how you have carried the thread of Faith's story in both pieces. I don't feel as if she is running in fear but rather in strength and that's very refreshing..thanks for your vist..Jae :)

Anonymous said...

well .. mystery is the word here !! what , who, why !!! so amny things left to imagination .. i like it :)

Giggles said...

Nice....short and sweet, leaving the reader hanging....well done!!!

Thanks for stopping by my blog!

Peace Giggles

Understanding Alice said...

Very nice - I like the portrait this piece word-paints :)

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