tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.comments2023-09-04T09:31:46.467+01:00Panopticulated - writing when prompted to do so.Susannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger2810125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-52212538491472072812014-02-16T22:00:42.932+00:002014-02-16T22:00:42.932+00:00I really like this piece, especially . . . strain...I really like this piece, especially . . . strain at these self imposed chains that hitch me to myself.<br />Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-39529158758872851232013-08-11T23:58:14.245+01:002013-08-11T23:58:14.245+01:00I have missed your writing, Susannah. This lovely,...I have missed your writing, Susannah. This lovely, aching and concise.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-14827499105973961312013-08-11T19:31:52.174+01:002013-08-11T19:31:52.174+01:00Susannah,
I am so pleased to have found your Blog...Susannah,<br /><br />I am so pleased to have found your Blog again today.<br />I really loved your poem, it was powerfully romantic and gripping about the image created....<br /><br />EileenEileen T O'Neill .....https://www.blogger.com/profile/03325632298717325699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-43997762662722599222013-08-11T18:06:52.389+01:002013-08-11T18:06:52.389+01:00Very exciting with an undertone of a dangerous rom...Very exciting with an undertone of a dangerous romance in the making.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06533340171645309120noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-11065501195744740052013-08-11T17:19:47.714+01:002013-08-11T17:19:47.714+01:00It's hard to ignore the one who's circling...It's hard to ignore the one who's circling and waiting!<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2013/08/11/a-short-whirl-with-richard/" rel="nofollow"><b>A Short Whirl</b></a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-61850675364164127442013-08-11T14:37:40.301+01:002013-08-11T14:37:40.301+01:00Spectacular response to the words!
My favorite li...Spectacular response to the words! <br />My favorite lines:<br />"a stain on the grey concrete of me" <br />and <br />"self imposed chains that hitch me to myself."<br />Mariannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17734900426632493796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-82458554555739175032013-08-11T14:17:37.687+01:002013-08-11T14:17:37.687+01:00A stain on the grey concrete of my self...
I like ...A stain on the grey concrete of my self...<br />I like this brief and to-the-point wordle.veronicahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09014627398376882098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-25644285363090154262013-08-11T13:31:27.883+01:002013-08-11T13:31:27.883+01:00I think the narrator is kidding as their words ind...I think the narrator is kidding as their words indicate she(?) is hooked already.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-65385285390105624812013-08-11T12:11:16.271+01:002013-08-11T12:11:16.271+01:00Very nice. This is my first time joining and it ha...Very nice. This is my first time joining and it has inspired me.aspiritofsimplicityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14870339828098281415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-52963178145282489592013-08-11T11:00:56.649+01:002013-08-11T11:00:56.649+01:00These are fondly written words and I wonder why th...These are fondly written words and I wonder why that indecision?? Hopefully it will turn into a riot of colors!!Nankahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05428694673909046094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-55835234007776820402013-08-11T08:34:02.510+01:002013-08-11T08:34:02.510+01:00Have missed you. Love your imagery here and how br...Have missed you. Love your imagery here and how brief you have been. Seems to make the poem more powerful because of that.<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/08/11/on-the-down-swing/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-35533171120583860582012-12-11T17:57:41.966+00:002012-12-11T17:57:41.966+00:00Good to see you Sherry! xGood to see you Sherry! xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-15456126312114458142012-12-11T17:53:27.601+00:002012-12-11T17:53:27.601+00:00Back for another read........this captures EXACTLY...Back for another read........this captures EXACTLY the emotion of those moments. "Entranced by the slow motion movement of his mouth"......been there, kiddo. Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-43137380771278791762012-11-20T13:01:59.154+00:002012-11-20T13:01:59.154+00:00True friends never really totally lose track of on...True friends never really totally lose track of one another. ;-)<br /><br />Someday, somewhere. <br /><br />I will look out for you.<br /><br />Wonderful to hear from you - hope all is well. x<br /><br />Sending good vibes your way. Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-51407315631785540572012-11-19T20:07:15.077+00:002012-11-19T20:07:15.077+00:00Some how, I lost track of a friend. Some times, I ...Some how, I lost track of a friend. Some times, I wonder how, and why. Was it just two paths separating in the wilderness? They say, all roads lead to Rome. Maybe someday, we'll meet again at the Trevi fountain, both of us feeding the pigeons, we'll bump in to each other, and catch up.Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17348447844218276729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-41499409824542396312012-07-21T08:02:58.201+01:002012-07-21T08:02:58.201+01:00Beautiful, exotic eroticism.Beautiful, exotic eroticism.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-71260314314069570462012-03-08T07:17:55.063+00:002012-03-08T07:17:55.063+00:00Hi Susannah;
Wow. Very nice. I like the energy of...Hi Susannah; <br />Wow. Very nice. I like the energy of this, the slow motion feel, and the unexpected ending. <br /><br />This wordle was fun.<br /> ;)<br />http://taralinda.wordpress.com/2012/03/05/quelled/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-18681876408536560292012-02-28T16:36:09.249+00:002012-02-28T16:36:09.249+00:00Powerful, intense, emotional...I think I may run o...Powerful, intense, emotional...I think I may run out of adjectives! Loved this.Mary B. Mansfieldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135589216216151585noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-21270829941750779072012-02-28T03:47:01.533+00:002012-02-28T03:47:01.533+00:00Oooh - very nice, terse throughout and a real zing...Oooh - very nice, terse throughout and a real zing at the end ... awful to lose your place on the map ...S.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-75883674005639021452012-02-28T03:24:38.287+00:002012-02-28T03:24:38.287+00:00Powerful write, Susannah, and a terrific use of th...Powerful write, Susannah, and a terrific use of the wordle. You've given us a picture of a conflict or confrontation, but left it vague enough to allow the imagination to fill in the details.Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-61514685677657409282012-02-28T02:17:19.478+00:002012-02-28T02:17:19.478+00:00loved the line about losing your place on the map....loved the line about losing your place on the map...Paula Wankenhttp://whenwordsescape.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-18692847184391100562012-02-27T16:27:37.282+00:002012-02-27T16:27:37.282+00:00I think you have described the moments when I hear...I think you have described the moments when I heard that loved ones were ill and were not going to be able to return home. You want to be able to react to be by their sides - instantly. Yet fear at the same time what you will find when you do arrive. That's what comes to my mind. Thank you.Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-35000713619065262502012-02-26T21:26:23.005+00:002012-02-26T21:26:23.005+00:00An intense and very satisfying wordle.An intense and very satisfying wordle.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-47876176964481850682012-02-26T19:07:26.830+00:002012-02-26T19:07:26.830+00:00Oh the words one never wanted to hear. I remember ...Oh the words one never wanted to hear. I remember the feeling of those moments.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-27631857370332405202012-02-26T16:26:51.116+00:002012-02-26T16:26:51.116+00:00My wordle feels like mine- but without the anxiety...My wordle feels like mine- but without the anxiety of feeling stuck. Great write.terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348440908615750286noreply@blogger.com