tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post803778682200552405..comments2023-09-04T09:31:46.467+01:00Comments on Panopticulated - writing when prompted to do so.: You Risk TearsSusannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-445849956841058582011-03-07T23:46:06.619+00:002011-03-07T23:46:06.619+00:00Thanks very much Kim. :-)Thanks very much Kim. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-45296139446102345562011-03-07T22:49:00.498+00:002011-03-07T22:49:00.498+00:00Susannah,
Feel like I have, at different times and...Susannah,<br />Feel like I have, at different times and in different circumstance, been both the protagonist and the antagonist you portray here. Nice write.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-53061133133453791992011-03-04T14:20:30.652+00:002011-03-04T14:20:30.652+00:00Thanks jingle, Ella and David. Your comment are m...Thanks jingle, Ella and David. Your comment are much appreciated. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-52394476793262478352011-03-04T14:14:39.523+00:002011-03-04T14:14:39.523+00:00I liked the whole poem, but especially,
Who are yo...I liked the whole poem, but especially,<br />Who are you, some midnight Mary?<br />Trains and coffee in your hair.<br />Wringing out your day old laundry,<br />Making out that you don't care.<br /><br />The metre is very good also.Awesome!Davidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17348447844218276729noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-30144961117107943132011-03-03T02:07:05.307+00:002011-03-03T02:07:05.307+00:00I liked it, the reality of life, fragile and broke...I liked it, the reality of life, fragile and broken. How we see the human condition of not being tamed~<br />Love the descriptive imagery!Ellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06070952447277684613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-70213121603803352992011-03-02T20:18:36.195+00:002011-03-02T20:18:36.195+00:00very powerful piece.
have a lovely Wednesday.very powerful piece.<br /><br />have a lovely Wednesday.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-24895502735143735592011-03-02T17:58:11.144+00:002011-03-02T17:58:11.144+00:00Thanks Kerry, it is a bit of a strange one and not...Thanks Kerry, it is a bit of a strange one and not my usual style. I think I will have another go at the prompt before the week is out. :-)Susannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-49487907031430583472011-03-02T14:49:23.899+00:002011-03-02T14:49:23.899+00:00This is a punchy modern write - so easy to identif...This is a punchy modern write - so easy to identify with, I found myself nodding at each line. I love where the prompt took you.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com