tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post6935835441994001508..comments2023-09-04T09:31:46.467+01:00Comments on Panopticulated - writing when prompted to do so.: Three Seconds. . .Susannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-38350625731129610662011-12-22T09:46:19.178+00:002011-12-22T09:46:19.178+00:00Thanks very much everyone for popping in and readi...Thanks very much everyone for popping in and reading, and taking the time to leave a comment. It is much appreciated. <br /><br />It's good to see you all. xSusannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-5281778493707528752011-12-22T03:31:30.910+00:002011-12-22T03:31:30.910+00:00Susannah, right back atcha about not seeing the wo...Susannah, right back atcha about not seeing the words jump out. And thank God it's not autobiographical. But I think if it were, you would have told us as well, because you strike me as courageous. The lines about the sky turning black and blue? A sky that is a spreading bruise... man, that really is powerful. Peace, Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/12/21/the-door-to-deceitful-delights-dverse/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-42108327439421175002011-12-19T04:08:13.820+00:002011-12-19T04:08:13.820+00:00I very much liked this. The destruction of hopes/l...I very much liked this. The destruction of hopes/loves/dreams are indeed bruising, turning one's blue skies black.<br /><br />You did well churning the alchemic brew "like a bruise". :)The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-26872518623273230472011-12-18T21:51:55.633+00:002011-12-18T21:51:55.633+00:00the end is so beautifulthe end is so beautifulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-17516321700100282932011-12-18T20:53:54.908+00:002011-12-18T20:53:54.908+00:00Vivid piece, Susannah. Yes, things can change in a...Vivid piece, Susannah. Yes, things can change in an instant.<br /><br />Pamela<br /><br />Happy holidays!flauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-9832985163433564812011-12-18T17:32:51.600+00:002011-12-18T17:32:51.600+00:00Susannah, This is a strong piece of writing. You&...Susannah, This is a strong piece of writing. You've captured something here, that unspoken moment that can change everything. Excellent write!brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2011/12/18/super-purple-rhino-boy/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-6630581535124356452011-12-18T15:10:46.661+00:002011-12-18T15:10:46.661+00:00Things certainly can change in an instant, can'...Things certainly can change in an instant, can't they?<br /><br />http://lkharris-kolp.blogspot.com/2011/12/trouble-at-bucks-billiards.htmlLaurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-64093081501804705302011-12-18T13:30:10.412+00:002011-12-18T13:30:10.412+00:00The ending of this wordle was stunning...the sky b...The ending of this wordle was stunning...the sky becoming black and blue like a bruise. Such vivid imagery! (From words that weren't all that easy)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-21904388290839229582011-12-18T13:07:50.969+00:002011-12-18T13:07:50.969+00:00I'm glad it isn't autobiographical, Susann...I'm glad it isn't autobiographical, Susannah, and that the bruise was figurative and not literal. Great poem; it had me reading it in one breathless rush. :)Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com