tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post4446783956371005480..comments2023-09-04T09:31:46.467+01:00Comments on Panopticulated - writing when prompted to do so.: Flashback - Sunday Scribblings #235Susannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-38400951305270954682010-10-06T23:49:50.437+01:002010-10-06T23:49:50.437+01:00Thanks everyone for reading and for your comments,...Thanks everyone for reading and for your comments, much appreciated.<br /><br />Susannah :-)Susannahhttp://panopticulated.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-91074396120726058642010-10-05T12:58:17.995+01:002010-10-05T12:58:17.995+01:00Nice writing, Susannah. I do think there is truth ...Nice writing, Susannah. I do think there is truth -- that the people we once were ARE still somewhere inside us.Diane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-30759605559376579362010-10-05T04:34:40.745+01:002010-10-05T04:34:40.745+01:00other comments pretty well cover the bravos and ho...other comments pretty well cover the bravos and hoorahs. All I can do is add mine. Nice work and more bravos and hoorahs from me.George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-70826101321046840242010-10-05T02:21:43.026+01:002010-10-05T02:21:43.026+01:00So true.So true.Meggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13074676856646898900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-9945859985280997422010-10-05T01:34:20.390+01:002010-10-05T01:34:20.390+01:00I love the idea of our past selves stalking our in...I love the idea of our past selves stalking our inner corridors - really cool poem!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-53640642813685068022010-10-04T22:35:12.956+01:002010-10-04T22:35:12.956+01:00Susannah, this is very thought-provoking, but also...Susannah, this is very thought-provoking, but also very eerie. I like where your mind went with this!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-15967434396205782032010-10-04T20:48:22.265+01:002010-10-04T20:48:22.265+01:00So much to think on in this beautiful poem...i lov...So much to think on in this beautiful poem...i love this one Susannah! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-74412795331881230552010-10-04T18:11:20.878+01:002010-10-04T18:11:20.878+01:00Beautifully done. We must be all that we once were...Beautifully done. We must be all that we once were - and all that we will be all at once..JaeJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-68745512379451665492010-10-04T10:18:42.083+01:002010-10-04T10:18:42.083+01:00BeautifulBeautifulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-31104640082349733112010-10-04T09:40:25.282+01:002010-10-04T09:40:25.282+01:00Absolutely brilliant, what a wonderful piece, so v...Absolutely brilliant, what a wonderful piece, so very well written, I loved it!! well done :o)Deborahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06231195313149947101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-38403176831291740102010-10-04T07:19:20.467+01:002010-10-04T07:19:20.467+01:00this has done miracles for my mood! brilliant!
ht...this has done miracles for my mood! brilliant!<br /><br />http://2short2sweet.blogspot.com/2010/10/day-3-heart-brings-you-back.htmlDivaa Divinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17457305933584528376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-59923928087362348462010-10-04T05:35:05.362+01:002010-10-04T05:35:05.362+01:00This poem was very, very beautiful. I loved the im...This poem was very, very beautiful. I loved the imagery you used and the way I couldn't read it without picturing everything in my mind. I absolutely loved "Perhaps the people we once were stalk our inner corridors walking them like ghosts." This was such a wonderfully written piece. Almost like music.<br /><br />Well done! :]RavenQuillshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01837486388548035316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-90395615022867452232010-10-04T03:51:03.320+01:002010-10-04T03:51:03.320+01:00i really enjoyed where you took this ... wonderful...i really enjoyed where you took this ... wonderful.JP/deborahhttp://www.janepoet.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-88822071640829481272010-10-03T23:40:20.269+01:002010-10-03T23:40:20.269+01:00...Perhaps
the people
we once were
stalk our in......<i>Perhaps<br /><br />the people<br /><br />we once were<br /><br />stalk our inner corridors<br /><br />walking them like ghosts<br /><br />holding on<br /><br />to fragments of memory<br /><br />and strains of music<br /><br />that we<br /><br />can no longer<br /><br />hear</i>...<br /><br />...wow those lines and this piece are hauntingly beautiful.dasuntouchahttp://dasuntoucha.blogspot.com/2010/10/scrub-wax.htmlnoreply@blogger.com