tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post2795448595135923474..comments2023-09-04T09:31:46.467+01:00Comments on Panopticulated - writing when prompted to do so.: A Greater DepthSusannahhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09581993763700327953noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-23344952502441387992012-01-18T15:05:08.665+00:002012-01-18T15:05:08.665+00:00I find it interesting that the narrator acknowledg...I find it interesting that the narrator acknowledges his/her vanity and pride in the belief that s/he has discovered this greater depth of meaning to it all. It reminds me of the hubris I had in younger years, so sure the rest of the world just didn't see what was really happening beneath the surface of life.<br /><br />Great use of the wordle, Susannah. :)Traci Bhttp://poemflow.wordpress.com/2012/01/16/fishing/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-61667937695764227882012-01-17T19:01:22.897+00:002012-01-17T19:01:22.897+00:00A very reflective piece of writing, Susannah. Grea...A very reflective piece of writing, Susannah. Great use of the words.Paul Andrew Russellhttp://blogpaulandrewrussell.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-73888927649471876092012-01-17T11:30:40.330+00:002012-01-17T11:30:40.330+00:00It grows in strength and there's a feeling of ...It grows in strength and there's a feeling of breakthrough.irenehttp://enerihot.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-43466175241658029372012-01-16T22:13:58.262+00:002012-01-16T22:13:58.262+00:00wonderful use of the wordle words, beautiful flow ...wonderful use of the wordle words, beautiful flow to this poem - contemplating the illusion, knowing what's real, what's important...<br /><br /><em>and it is only dormant<br />to those, with no desire<br />to walk through walls</em><br /><br />I really like that.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-8780729383700437222012-01-16T21:40:42.920+00:002012-01-16T21:40:42.920+00:00How gorgeous. I love poems that surprise a sound f...How gorgeous. I love poems that surprise a sound from me and yours did when I hit the end. I didn't notice a single wordle word, the poem works so well.<br /><br />margoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-28927602937799303092012-01-16T15:30:10.774+00:002012-01-16T15:30:10.774+00:00The piece reflects the title, Susannah. This is g...The piece reflects the title, Susannah. This is gorgeous. I love every word, but especially the final stanza. It is up to each of us individually to walk through those walls.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2012/01/15/perfect/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-82148077352492862002012-01-16T04:03:27.971+00:002012-01-16T04:03:27.971+00:00Knock-knock. True. Well said. It only takes a door...Knock-knock. True. Well said. It only takes a door to open.<br /><br />Good one Susannah.The Unknowngnomehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00310142102993090697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-61261413720371190892012-01-16T03:22:41.709+00:002012-01-16T03:22:41.709+00:00very nice Susannah - deft weaving of the wordle wo...very nice Susannah - deft weaving of the wordle words; I especially like "I eschew the crisp notes"S.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-47871455066838377782012-01-16T03:15:42.545+00:002012-01-16T03:15:42.545+00:00Your words do not strain to fit.I love the last li...Your words do not strain to fit.I love the last lines-<br />"and it is only dormant<br />to those, with no desire<br />to walk through walls"terihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348440908615750286noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-13520686403188845552012-01-16T00:55:42.962+00:002012-01-16T00:55:42.962+00:00That stanza says so much, Susannah. Nice one.
Pam...That stanza says so much, Susannah. Nice one.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-24389698694548464072012-01-15T22:57:20.843+00:002012-01-15T22:57:20.843+00:00Just beautiful. Last two stanzas are beautiful......Just beautiful. Last two stanzas are beautiful...I love contemplating the walking through walls to find depth!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-41994236985633351162012-01-15T20:42:56.132+00:002012-01-15T20:42:56.132+00:00Compelling and strong piece that demands second an...Compelling and strong piece that demands second and third readings! Love it, Susannah.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-63142193974140641572012-01-15T20:16:28.811+00:002012-01-15T20:16:28.811+00:00What a lovely musing! Thanks for sharing.What a lovely musing! Thanks for sharing.D. Jean Quarleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01327174739435123349noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2866329577695235177.post-61700592270799096722012-01-15T19:51:11.587+00:002012-01-15T19:51:11.587+00:00Metaphysical poetry this early in the morning is u...Metaphysical poetry this early in the morning is unusual but I like it.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15937202381298099458noreply@blogger.com